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qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2003-03-20 09:34 AM

WISH UPON A STAR

I sit outside my window,
and think what a beautiful night.
I search the sky,
with all my might.
Looking for answers,
peace of mind.
A lone star,
is all I find.
I close my eyes,
and make a wish.
To be in your arms,
and a heavenly kiss.
I’m as lonely,
as that star in the sky.
Only you can put the twinkle,
back in my eye.
Am I foolish?
Or just in love?
Another star,
appears above.
It got a partner,
I wait for mine.
So again,
I can shine.
Because,
with you near,
my whole world,
seems so clear.
You hold my heart,
you’re in my soul.
Next time I’m with you,
I won’t let go.
But I’m all alone,
here tonight.
And I’ll keep wishing,
Until I find my light!

I

Michael!!

ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (03-21-2003 09:20 AM).]

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-03-20 07:42 PM

Very nicely done, it gets my vote.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2003-03-20 10:33 PM

I like this too but would like to see you use the word 'and' instead of the ampersand. It will make it easier for Ron to edit if it's accepted for the book. (voting now!)

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2003-03-21 09:20 AM

Wishing upon stars poems, are always so delightful, and full of hope. Yours is truely one I would love to see in the book.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2003-03-21 09:22 AM

Thanx guys--I really appreciate the votes

ELMO

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-21 07:23 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, fear not, there is always a way to the light and soon you and Michael will be together I'm sure as he thinks the same for you! (big huggggssssss) You have my vote, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

6 posted 2003-03-21 07:50 PM

And a vote for Elmo from me.
Jason

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

7 posted 2003-03-22 04:03 AM

I really enjoyed your view of wishing upon a star.

Dawn

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

8 posted 2003-03-22 02:05 PM

Awe Thanx a bunch guys & Mistletoe, I hope ur right!

I love you guyz!!!!

ELMO

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2003-03-22 06:55 PM

A lovely write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

10 posted 2003-03-23 11:40 AM

Lucky Michael! Very nicely done. I voted on this,

singular_one
Junior Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 14

11 posted 2003-03-24 05:52 AM

I really like this one. It is so... peaceful and cute.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

12 posted 2003-03-24 03:28 PM

Awe Thank you, thank you!!! Unfortunatly Mike doesn't see it that way--maybe soon he'll realize what he gave up, b4 its too late!! I really miss him!!!

ELMO

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

13 posted 2003-03-25 01:14 PM

May you find that person who can put those stars back in your eyes. Nicely written! *applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

14 posted 2003-03-27 08:42 PM

Awe thanx Pearl--I hope he comes back soon, I really miss him!!

ELMO

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

15 posted 2003-03-28 04:05 PM

If Michael fails you, may you soon find someone else who is totally worthy of your love and inspires you to great words. I voted for this nicely written piece.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

16 posted 2003-03-31 02:50 PM

You have my vote! I loved this poem, probably one of my favorites.

Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me...
mend my broken heart and love me
because I forget how to smile.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

17 posted 2003-03-31 03:43 PM

Awe--Thanx Flower & Silent!!! I love this place!!

ELMO

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

18 posted 2003-04-05 09:19 AM

This is so sweet. I haven't been on here forever (alot going on!!!!) But this is the first poem that caught my eye, and its just precious.
LP1

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