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Sweet Release
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Sweet Release |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Is it necessary, this pain? or is it like a spring rain, coming and going, never slowing to care about who it gets wet, and yet I must always wonder, though soaked through the skin, when will the sun come again, darkness reigns and hatred raves, the pain flows through us all in waves, the slow torture, rapsody of hatred loss of reason. this disease which I am feeling ripping through me, bringing me down to my knees falling on the floor, yet crying for more, sweet release, sweet pain, sweet torture… I need the release, I need the pain, just as all life must have rain, maybe I’ve been living in a dream, maybe it is time to wake up, to live in reality like everyone, yet it makes me need to scream. Yet I don’t quite feel like it yet, I think ill live in dream land a while yet, the pain is worth it, yes it is. The agony of blood spilling, the loss of all feeling, is nothing compared to what you’ve done to me. you’ve made me believe we had a thing in common, something to relate upon, but guess not. laying here now just laying here, and rotting, the insides eaten by worms my brain my lungs my feet to start, but maybe they, like you, would rather just tear into my heart, rip it out, keep it for yourself then throw it kick it around, find a hammer with it and pound, pound til you find your release, your pleasure your gift. to bring the pain upon another, who loved you as a friend, a brother, who maybe wished there was something more, but nevermore. My heart is laying on the floor, never to beat again, hopefully, and with it I find the release, the pain, the final ending to the rain, yet when it all comes to pass, may the sun shine on you ‘til the last. |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
Sounds like a strong bond between you and that someone, but the pain that they caused you. Anyways nice write Shayne |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Never give up on your dreams....they're worth hanging onto!!!! Well, I need a tissue now.....  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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