Dark Poetry #3 |
Clouds |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sudden clouds hover like black crows over my head, obscuring the sun darkening my mind. Words as sharp as a butcher’s knife cut my serenity into pieces bleeding to death. I yearn for nothingness, stopping my breath. I glide into silence, erasing connections. Once I had felt loved. I faintly remember submerged tunes of nightingales. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Once I had felt loved. I faintly remember." enjoyed...James |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
great image: Words as sharp as a butcher’s knife cut my serenity into pieces bleeding to death. the old saying: stick ans stones... etc. is incorrect - words can be like knives, and cut extremely deeply. -majnu |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
deep and graphic I like it. Well done! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you friends for reading and sharing your thoughts. Sometimes darkness enfolds us painfully .... thanks to God at the end of the tunnel the light waits ... Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita . . . this is beautiful! xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my sweet Margherita, this hurts so much |
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AlCowie Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92London, UK |
Clarity and profundity in poetry of obscurity and gravity. Nice |
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