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Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2001-02-19 10:31 AM

Limbo

One day
I shall stand
Upon the shores
Of a far lesser place
Than Heaven;
I shall not care.
I will stand
With folded hands
And calmly watch
That narrow space
That separates
Our sins,
And see
Across those turbulent waters,
Your useless struggle
To disperse
The stygian tide.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-02-19 10:46 AM

You really have a certain poetic stamp you know Rex.

To claim a style of one's own isn't always an easy thing...I think you have succeeded.

Enjoyed the read as per usual

K

...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2001-02-19 01:39 PM

Another powerful piece, Rex. Bold and thought provoking. Smooth and classically penned.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

3 posted 2001-02-20 08:12 PM

very nice, Rex

well stated
and something
to think about

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-02-21 03:37 AM

Rex,
As usual. Superb!!!!
Be well
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

5 posted 2001-02-22 12:24 PM

wow! this was Really really good! you do have a great talent!

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2001-02-22 06:48 AM

I've only read two or three of your works but they have been excellent, this one is no exception.

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

7 posted 2001-02-23 06:47 AM

This one of yours really appealed to me Rex

Loved it! Take care.

~ Tara ~

PS: I had to look up what Stygian meant!

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

8 posted 2001-02-26 12:49 PM

*stands and applauds*
You are a fantastic writer.
I enjoy your work very VERY much!
*thanx*

mYsTiC

*btw* lose the cowboy outfit.
Doesn't do you quality justice.
You are a master!

[This message has been edited by mystic requiem (edited 02-26-2001).]

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