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you flatten me
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you flatten me |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California 
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you flatten me i am sunken you flattened me deep down i feel you seep and i don't mind you left a smile to dance on my lips and moist kisses on my body linger i can feel the air flattening, i am sunken and i remember you stretched out i wait in the still motionless . . . you cover my mind flattening me until you return i adore your strength i despise my weakness "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice imagery,I like this |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
This poem is really good and u r so talented, and i havent been here for a while but i was looking at what i've missed and came acrossed your poem...and i have to be honest what got my eye is ur nick or name is A.L. Becker, and it caught my eye cuz my full name is Amanda Lynne Becker, tho i live on the east coast...but it was a well written poem...  Manda |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
I know the feeling |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
what a nice name!  |
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