Dark Poetry #3 |
She Offers You the Ring of Serpents |
fathomless Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 11SC, USA |
Acquaint me with these fantasies to which you escape Begot of fruitless vision You followed the girl, But by tommorows wake; you'll long for solitude Not finding any, only leds to escape through darker means, Drink and heavy lidded surreality Bouts of anger and introversion come in waves of depression crashing over you Soaking you to the marrow, What warm will you find She possesses the ring of serpents, two entwined, Lies with in her coiling stir and rock the center Always seeming to fall in line She just wants to lure you to her bed To capture your seed, and take you prisoner She offers you the ring of serpents She offers you her hand But its not like love or friendship Its something different something hidden Finding solice, a quick escape through persciption pills and bottled wine Caught up forever in frustration not a man to be bound but finds himself binded Scars on your heart that never felt the wound Watching sunsets creep across horizions; wanting to leave to enjoy peace with yourself But you will never again be just one man I saw an angel in the marble and carved until i set it free |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Brilliant! |
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fathomless Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 11SC, USA |
thanks i wrote it about my best friend, he was kind of forced to marry this girl he got pregnant but i think she planed it now, hes miserable poor guy... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hi - welcome to dark, and to passions... My only critique at the moment - run your poetry through spellcheck on word before you post... Spelling errors can be distracting to read.. K |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
outstanding, even with a few miserable spell errors |
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JackSpratt New Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 8 |
This is cool. I love the dark stuff. |
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