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Dark Poetry #3

All That Hates

sORE
New Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 6
Toronto

0 posted 2003-01-24 01:46 PM

Flatter with your fake flashy shell
Being, not believing what these useless words spell
Put away, locked up, from all commercial arrogance
If it doesn’t go away i’m happier without presence
To exist in a world without meaning
I’d choose not to and leave my soul bleeding
All life’s meanings now soon receding
As time passes by I start believing
That an eternity of torture and pain
Would interest me more than to live this game
I must fuse all sense and suffocate all dignity
Because to be, now means loneliness and self unity
Objects are now passed as another piece of property
What wasn’t yours to begin with still isn’t!

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

1 posted 2003-01-24 04:13 PM

Hey Mike. Good to see ya. Nice write.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

2 posted 2003-01-24 04:37 PM

NO insight just my opinion really enjoyed reading this.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

[This message has been edited by Ada'doLisdo'ti (01-24-2003 04:38 PM).]

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-01-25 12:39 PM

No insight here either, but I can honestly say I enjoyed the read.

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