Dark Poetry #3 |
Rain |
jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Rain taps outside my window pane. Tears rain as you fill me with ecstatic pain. Rain falls unceasing in downpours. Moaning you rain me with your wet kisses. Rain changes to frenzied storm. Insatiable, we ride our passions matching the rain. We and the rains are all spent out. [This message has been edited by jjote (01-04-2003 09:46 AM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I always loved the rains. Like this a lot. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i love it too, funny i was just writing about it nice sensous poem |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I love the rain>it cleanses the soul.It captured the beauty of rain.Very... soothing jjote!!! |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Not too bad! I always saw the rain as a kind of "cleansing," not so much erotic...but I liked what you wrote. If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer." |
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