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Dark Poetry #3

Rain

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-01-04 09:41 AM

Rain taps
outside my window pane.

Tears rain
as you fill me
with ecstatic pain.

Rain falls
unceasing in downpours.

Moaning
you rain me
with your wet kisses.

Rain changes
to frenzied storm.

Insatiable,
we ride our passions
matching the rain.

We and the rains
are all spent out.

[This message has been edited by jjote (01-04-2003 09:46 AM).]

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

1 posted 2003-01-04 11:40 AM

I always loved the rains. Like this a lot.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-01-04 12:14 PM

i love it too,
funny i was just writing about it
nice sensous poem

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

3 posted 2003-01-04 04:44 PM

I love the rain>it cleanses the soul.It captured the beauty of rain.Very... soothing jjote!!!

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

4 posted 2003-01-05 01:30 AM

Not too bad! I always saw the rain as a kind of "cleansing," not so much erotic...but I liked what you wrote.

If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer."

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