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iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA

0 posted 2003-01-03 10:59 PM


Time is ticking,
sticking to my mind,
One second goes by,
Another blows by me,

What did I miss?
What did I see?
One minute goes by,
The world crumbles before me.

Time is lost,
In a never ending scene,
Destruction and chaos,
...death it seems.

One day goes by,
All the memories,
All the lies,
You cry,

Wondering why?
Did you waste so time?
Did others die?
Time is ticking...

You grow of old age,
Tell wise things and tails,
One lifetime goes by,
And your lies - your memories...

Slip away...

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GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-01-04 02:01 PM


I like this.. definitely a thinker.
Especially since when I'm lost in thoughts my motto is that time stands still

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

LADY_DEATH
Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105
Fl
2 posted 2003-01-04 04:24 PM


I chose that because i am ripping off my arm so i can pat you on the back for a wonderful poem!


iMMuNe
Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA
3 posted 2003-01-04 09:42 PM


Thank you both, feels good to get some replies now and then

Thanks again

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