Dark Poetry #3 |
Its easier |
GeorgiaPaver Junior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 15Savannah, GA |
It's easier for you to walk away than it is for you to reach out to me It's easier for you to look away than it is for you to see the depth of my despair It's easier for you to look through me than it is for you to see "me" It's easier for you to distance yourself than it is for you to really care It's easier for you to judge than it is for you to understand It's easier for you to label than it is for you to get aquainted It's easier for you to bask in your joy than to feel my pain It's easier for me to look away than it is to let you see the feelings betrayed through my eyes It's easier for me to cry than it is for me to talk It's easier for me to distance myself than it is for me to trust that you won't hurt me It's easier for me to die than it is to face life's challanges It's hard for me to smile when I am hurting It's hard for me to talk when you won't understand It's hard for me to reach out when I need help the most If only you'd really look at me and understand who I am If you only cared to reach out when I pushed you away If only you would hold me without asking why If only you would acknowledge the validty of my feelings [This message has been edited by GeorgiaPaver (12-02-2002 07:00 PM).] |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Alot of us don't try hard enough huh? Very good poem that expressed that point well. WinterWren |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very interesting...James |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
I like this poem, it has meaning and a point...it is well written..I can relate to it too.. keep writing! Love Always, Manda aka POD |
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