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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-11-25 04:29 PM

It was always some tragic litany
of sins against, upon, about.
Inside of thought, grew doubt
that the wolf was never there
perhaps was on a dare, who cares.

The train left the station
taking with it my heart, my
feelings metal wheeling, away
from where you are. Standing,
hand upon forehead again,
drama, always drama, with
you it never changes, I've
been through all the stages.

I've nothing left for you,
but to bid a fond adieu.

(and I'll pray the wolves away
from biting at your heels)

WhiteRose 11/25/02

"my reflection becomes me"

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2002-11-25 05:18 PM

now this is a goodbye i don't ever want.

nice little rant rose.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2002-11-29 04:32 AM

This one got to me, well done!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

She
Junior Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 41
Wishing On A Northern Star

3 posted 2002-11-30 01:00 AM

I like it.

A message that more should read.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

4 posted 2002-11-30 04:15 PM

A goodbye, on the dark side, applause!!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2002-11-30 05:42 PM

Ms Rose... nice to read you again

Maree.

PoetOfDarkness2002
Junior Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 41
Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world

6 posted 2002-12-08 02:55 PM

This poem got to me...Made me think of someone that i just said goodbye to, and there was nothing but drama with him, never changed...You are a very talented writer, and this poem has a deep meaning beyond words, it seems....I look forward to reading your poetry again....Keep shining!

Love Always,
Manda aka POD

"Because I could not stop for death he kindly stopped for me, the carriage held but just ourselves and immortality."

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

7 posted 2002-12-08 03:00 PM

I agree with Poetofdarkness2002, i just recently lost somebody close, but it was a very well written poem.And i hate goodbyes!!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-12-18 12:15 PM

Ooo, love your dark shivers.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-12-26 12:57 PM

Well written...James

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