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Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
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Australia

0 posted 2002-11-24 06:15 AM



Its so quiet,
floating.
So light,
secrets whisper...

Mice hear and gossip, while
the walls whisper.
Cats attuned have a way of finding lairs.
They just stare transiently,
at the opening and only exit.
Waiting for the snare...
To gulp the secrets, and digest the truth.

© Copyright 2002 Nicholas Hall - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2002-11-29 04:29 AM


I enjoyed this one, kinds throws a new perspective on things!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
2 posted 2002-11-30 12:20 PM


>; P
Excellent job!
Zai jian
Carson

If time and space are curved, where do all of the straight people come from?
Let's get one thing straight: I'm not!

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-12-18 12:31 PM


Deeper than it should be.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-12-30 11:04 PM


Interesting...James
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
5 posted 2002-12-31 12:49 PM


Very different and very interesting - I hope I digested it properly. I liked.
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