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LADY_DEATH
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0 posted 2002-12-29 12:57 PM


          The Death of a Nation

what begins must end but will begin again
So goes another deadly year,
bringing us closer to the truth
Truth that only the government knows


Is it alright to breathe the fresh air?
with the fear of smallpox now being known
Can i open my personal mail?
or will i perish upon touching it?


What's to celebrate about the new year?
it brings us one step closer to extinction
Stop all the violence that affects the nation
A nation which is now a toxic waste dump


How do you sleep at night,Mr. President?
while your citizens live on in fear
Does the threat of war excite you?
Innocent lives fighting for a deadly  cause


© Copyright 2002 LADY_DEATH - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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1 posted 2002-12-29 07:10 PM


An interesting poem.  Sounds a bit like an activist's speech.  I'm of a more cynical mindset.  I don't believe that humanity will ever collectively "turn around" and stop all of its violence.  I'm even known to say at times that the Bomb is all we have left.  But that's SO cold war.  

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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2 posted 2002-12-30 10:55 PM


How wonderful though that we have choices. Me? I choose to live in the NOW rather in the fear of history yet to be written. immature maybe, but it really works well for me. I thank God that I live in America.
fractal007
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3 posted 2002-12-31 10:28 PM


I hold nothing against you, as you were concerned I did earlier.  I may disagree with you at times, but who doesn't ever disagree with someone?  Again, good poem.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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