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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2002-11-19 10:46 PM




beyond the moon
over the rainbow
where dreams are spun
of windswept tunes
that sang between
the pinktopped trees
i search for you now
in the echo

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-11-20 09:12 PM


This is a great thought, well written

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2002-11-20 10:24 PM


thanks,

nice photo, youre hot

wranx
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3 posted 2002-11-20 11:23 PM


Though you write with with a certain insight, your eyesight seems to be wanting.

Hot? Sheesh...

But, thanks

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2002-11-21 05:04 PM



hot, as in the midnight rider, himself,
gregg allman,
you mean you havent been told that?

wranx
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5 posted 2002-11-21 11:26 PM


Actually yes, and about as used up.

Now, for a little "Whipping Post"

Ed

fractal007
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6 posted 2002-11-21 11:54 PM


I loved this one.  You've compacted so much into such beautiful imagery.  This is definitely going into my library.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Zinsser
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7 posted 2002-11-22 01:30 PM


very much enjoyed this write.....
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2002-11-22 02:29 PM



yea,whipping post,
talk about the pain of a tortured soul in love
well,greggs still kickin it, isnt he?

bsquirrel
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9 posted 2002-12-18 12:46 PM


I love this poem. It melts like candy, and breaks like the wind (whatever that meant).
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