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Family Game |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Concerning the recent events with my brother and with my family Your simplicity puzzles me and Your complexity amuses me. I would ask if you'd like to talk but I know what you would do, how you would lie about all of it with a straight face and then start another round around the round table downstairs. Someday we will catch up with you and understand what it is you did so long ago, in secret, and I will reveal my secrets so the final few pieces will fall to the floor. But until then we are left asking questions during the day and prowling around during the night, looking for the answers. Still I fear that one day you will die by this family game and I will be left an empty guilty man. Your comic blunders concern me and Your rebelious thoughts amuse me. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" -- Magus [This message has been edited by fractal007 (11-16-2002 11:58 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, that is powerful and intense. I like the way you worked the opening and closing, leaving much room for an intro as well as a sequel to this apparently real-life saga. Well done. Peace. |
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Shade Junior Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 10 |
I really like this. What I enjoy most about writing, is the freedom of interpertation. What I took from this...well...it hits home. Shade |
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