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In Your Pierre Cardin
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In Your Pierre Cardin |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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You looked so hot in your Pierre Cardin, I had to apologize for not knowing the label at first glance. But your saucy smile put me into a sizzling summer trance. Expensive Tiffany moments never could hold my attention as much as silky sand slipping gently between my toes, warm salt air tingling my nose, the dancing stars that applauded our first embrace as I stared into your face. You looked so hot in your Pierre Cardin. Too bad you had a cold KMart heart. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, I used to wear "Goeffrey Beane", but that was in another life. K-Mart heart? Must be someone else. Ed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ouch! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ed, your heart is priceless, no matter the label. Karilea, thanks! Just a tiny sting though, right? |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
this was really clever. -majnu |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, as in silly but clever? Hope you aren't wearing Pierre's today. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
that was a good ending I like it a lot |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one!!! His heart is not a Kmart special? LOL |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Heh, good use of irony. Your litle scene of reflexion about the beach in the summer was really well done. This one goes in my library for sure. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jose, thanks! How are things? Oh, Devine one! Thanks for the visit and comment. 007, what a nice complement. It's an honor, thank you! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true the saying that "all that glitters is not gold". It applies to people too. Love that ending Kacy...really packs a wallop. You can never win or lose |
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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
Stay far away from LA, this town caters to the "label" people mentality, frightening where things "are at" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey Trace, so happy you visited! Hope the University schedule isn't draining you too much. Drex, thanx, for the reply and the warning. That's one reason I chose not to return. But of course labels are still fashionable here in Denver as well. I often tear them off the clothes. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...yes too bad...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey James, thanks for stopping by. Hope PC isn't your fave brand. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the ending, Kacy.... It smarts!!!!  ~ hugs of rodent ironyLyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A blue light special?  cute with a wry edge, lady... |
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