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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Siphon kiss ----------- I am dying in a perfect red / violet trance. Sigh, if I can't start, I'll replay. To you- siphon suck. To you- siphon kiss. There are senses to know no one cares about. Siphon suck. I am spiralling in twilight, I'd invite you to dance- kiss. Numb and light. Dying in trance-suck. Last chance, in this tremor. In this hum, oh so melodic. To you. Not me, To you. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm. Interesting. You do a very good job personifying an actual experience and critiquing and commenting on it. This is an interesting read that I'll be putting in my library. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This should have musical backing. Maybe some light industrial? (Does such a thing exist?) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There are senses to know no one cares about ******************************************* LOL, 'tis so true. Enjoyed the write. It didn't suck.  |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
Quote bssquirrel:"(Does such a thing exist?)" I beleive it does, as you ask it is now a song. light industrial might do well to describe it, i describe it as gothic punk. or simply... new wave...  |
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