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Stryder
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 29
Silent Hill

0 posted 2002-12-22 04:27 PM


You cannot behold with your natural eyes
The dolor that consumes me
The heartache that overwhelms me
Which is the centre of my life

I live in an alternate reality
Although I breathe the same air as you
And walk amongst you
My mind dwells elsewhere

You can look deep into my eyes
The very windows to my soul
And still not descry
The sadness that I feel

You can put your arm around me
And tell me sincerely
That everything will be alright
But the centre tells me otherwise

"Two wrongs don't make a right,
but three rights make a left."

© Copyright 2002 Stryder - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-22 08:38 PM


Very mystical, out of the mists feeling to this. Well done.
I also enjoyed your multiple right turns.

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