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The Proverb of My Fear
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The Proverb of My Fear |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A little poem summing up some of the tough issues I'm dealing with right now in life. Perhaps it may serve as some proverb to help others... It's in simplicity that I find the worst in people be what you can't be attain what you can't attain take what is not yours It's in complexity that I find reality and questions take each at a time each day has enough problems write it down for now If I'm to change course now who am I to dispute history? If this path isn't my path then I am slaying myself. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I liked this one. It poses some of the same thoughts in my own mind and it's open enough so that others can relate no what there problem may be. Good write!  Regret not that which you have done, |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i'll be honest. this peice was all over the place. you throw several ideas at us but don't develop them. with the skills you have previously shown i would say each idea could be a great peice in itself, or a great stanza of a larger peice. a small note: proverbs are usually concise. |
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