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Three Little Bears Junior Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 13Wisconsin, U.S. |
Potholes dissolving into muddy canyons, pulled wheels to the ditch. I remember everything: the road and the car that carried me, the man; and the way his hand tasted as he muffled my cries. A culvert's flow rinsed blood, but couldn't dress naked skin. I don't know who found me. In a white room: nurses hid raining eyes and a plastic surgeon told me his hands didn't have the magic I needed. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I actually read this on your website before you posted it. I was as struck by it now as I was just now. It's a gentle poem about a violent act. It's so well done! I look forward to reading a lot more from you. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Your pen has a good touch for this sort of work. Not graphic, but still gets the message across. Enjoyed.  "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Three Little Bears Junior Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 13Wisconsin, U.S. |
Poet deVine and Temptress, Thank you both for your kind words, I'm so glad you liked this poem.  ~Andrea~ |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I too, found this a very gentle poem. You tackle the subject matter very well. Thank you, and welcome to Dark Passions. -------------------------------------------------------------- What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Three Little Bears Junior Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 13Wisconsin, U.S. |
Romeo, Thank you for the warm welcome and for replying to this poem. I'm glad you liked it. ~Andrea |
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