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Dark Poetry #3

Winter

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-02-15 01:54 AM

Tasteless gloves comfort my hands,

Imprisoning the lost warmth,

As coldness creeps closer on end,

An ally in disguise that which it pretends,

Recognizing the boundaries on which it stands,

It is torture by its forever end.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 02-15-2001).]

Baby G
Junior Member

since 2001-01-28

Posts 39
Australia

1 posted 2001-02-15 06:13 AM

Short but sweet, great work!

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

2 posted 2001-02-15 01:36 PM

Short but nice, it reminds me of, well winter

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

3 posted 2001-02-15 11:50 PM

Enjoyed this one!*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

4 posted 2001-02-16 11:59 PM

Good poem! I like how its right to the point...

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