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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2002-10-17 09:10 PM

Reflection

I see
Beyond the brittle blue
Glazed!
With memories and tears

I see
The anarchy of time
Veneered!
From a generation in pose

I see
The blackened vessels
Voided!
Conveying hearts long dead

I see you!

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

1 posted 2002-10-18 05:03 PM

This is great...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

2 posted 2002-10-19 10:08 AM

And here I thought my disguise nearly perfect! Thank you for the mirror.

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

3 posted 2002-10-20 01:06 AM

I never enjoyed looking into the mirror, and now I know why! Thank you for the incredible piece!

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2002-10-21 10:00 PM

WhileIWasGone ~ I’m not so sure it’s great but I am glad you enjoyed.

K ~ Sometimes we are the last ones to see through our own disguise!

D edgar Grey ~ It can be the hardest thing of all to look at yourself.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2002-10-27 09:32 AM

we do indeed become calloused..we dont realize until someone points it out how we are on the outside...i know there are times when something just doesnt feel right..but i dont realize that it shows on the outside, until i'm called down about it...we get wrapped up in the stuff of our lives sometimes, and let it bog us down...we need to stay aware of ourselves, so that we are able to treat people with the respect we all deserve...

always enjoy reading you eddie..

hugs, g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown

bre28
New Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 3

6 posted 2002-10-27 10:14 AM

I have read my fair share of poetry and i am impressed with urs and hope to see more in the future

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2002-10-28 04:32 AM

g ~ I always appreciate your comments my friend, thank you!

bre28 ~ I’m glad you enjoyed, you’ll find me lurking around here somewhere!

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