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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-13 08:04 PM



You think you can rip me apart
With your stories of your past
All the truth pored out
As you bared it all

All it does is let me
Collect the knowledge
Of what makes you weak
That you thought you make me scared

You have given me full
Contact to your emostions
Or is this what your want
Is it part of your master plan

Where in the end
You are a trator to us all
You find pleasure
In the deseption of it all

Sometimes I wonder how you sleep
It is a wonder really
I see you walk around
As if you got an hour of sleep

I know the truth
All night you roll in bed
Remember what was done
Your afraid of it

Your scared it will come back
I know the truth
Do you have the guts
To let it in

It is what you do to us
Cause you told me
The Truth

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Amaranthine
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since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
1 posted 2002-10-14 11:29 PM


True you can't spell, but never admit that... just say you spell differently for artistic reasons!
Loved this piece, it seems rather emotionally Machiavellian.  Just my thing.  Well done!

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