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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-10-12 11:09 AM

Disfigured
and
used.

Fed the 'crap' that no one else would take.

Battered
and
bruised.

Taken for granted by the ones who I cared for most
but soon found were fake.

-morbid-
living the complication of two.
What happened in the process?
......
I am a snake.
I hold no meaning to you.
...morbid...

Threatened
and
mislead.

I'll feed off live and begin to grow.

Forgotten
and
bled.

Into what can I evolve, when I'm stuck in the undertow?

-morbid-
living the complication of two.
What happened in the process?
......
I put your life at sake.
I hold no meaning to you.
...morbid...

Tranquil
and
alive.

This can never be me.

Burning,
I’m
Afire.

No one can ever save me…

morbid
me.

Whispered words:
"So morbid, but there’s beauty beneath."
So, why'd you leave??
Why’d you leave??
I’m left alone,
And hollow
With nothing to do..
But…

Rot and bleed

"Wish I was too dead to care...
...If indeed I cared at all."

~corey~taylor~

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (10-12-2002 02:26 PM).]

Amaranthine
Member

since 2002-10-06

Posts 61
ON Canada

1 posted 2002-10-12 12:28 PM

This was beautiful. I really like the way it is formatted, as well--- I would add that I am impressed and intrigued by your fascinating grasp of the subjective.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-10-12 12:31 PM

awesome!!!!
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Whispered words:
"So morbid, but there’s beauty beneath."
So, why'd you leave??
Why’d you leave??
I’m left alone,
And hollow
With nothing to do..
But…

Rot and bleed
______________________
this was my favorite part. i really like this one...as usual. you are an awesome writer and i would also like to thank you for introducing me to this site...i`ve taken a fancy to it. lol

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2002-10-12 06:38 PM

I really liked this. The format of the poem was pretty new to me, so I enjoyed it very much. Great job at this one.

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-10-19 10:08 AM

Amaranthine- my fascinating grasp of the subjective.? Oooo. Thanks!

Allison~ i do what i can.

Dopey- you will find, that my poems are unlike any other one you'll read.

Thanks to the three of you.

Best Wishes,

Sara

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe..
Something's coming over me.
Lust to find and a soul to keep.
Because you love me.."

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

5 posted 2002-10-19 10:09 AM

I didnt mean to do this

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (10-19-2002 10:10 AM).]

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