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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-10 09:14 PM



Softly, I
caress the soot
from face.

Remove the tentacles
of the false gods
from your flesh,

with scalpel
of kiss.
Lipstick of iodine
to stave from
infect

let me inject
with tongue
the cool of alcohol.

Surgical
with lace
soft edge.

Cleanse of mind
and spirit,
please
don't fear it.

I'll change
the atomic structure
of your composition,
with your permission.

Slight of hand
slip upon smooth
of skin now cleansed.

Lick of tongue
on flesh
for real
of feel.

We'll copulate
now with the absence
of the demigod
I long to savor
your touch.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Amaranthine
Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
1 posted 2002-10-11 01:11 PM


Your imagery is devastating.  Don't abandon your industrial bent just yet, you only begin to develop!  Can't wait to read your next...
WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-10-11 02:11 PM


This has become interesting for me. I'm not ready to let go yet. :-) The battle rages on.
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