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Still As Stone |
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Sikanda Member
since 2002-10-08
Posts 54 |
Still as stone, still as breath Broken fragments of a song Time stands strangely still, as death All hope as long since been gone Dark of moon, dark of sun Dark of despair, dark of night Deeds have now been paid and done Darkness now has conquered light End of life, end of time End of laughter, gaity, and fun Where flowers once grew, grows filth and slime All good has been overcome Cold as winter, cold as ice What once was found is lost again Evil lived while Goodness died Earth is now Evils domain While I was writing this I felt like someone was looking over my shoulder.....probably just my way overactive imagination but still it freaked me out!! [This message has been edited by Sikanda (10-10-2002 02:34 PM).] |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
Devils advocate here... isn't death only/simply/horribly an potent tool of change,entropy? Death isn;t bad, just Our fear/image/terror of it/him/her Maybe/possibly/not???!!! |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
"Cold as winter, cold as ice What once was found is lost again Evil lived while Goodness died Earth is now Evils domain" I Personaly like the Winter. I personally feel There are some things I've lost I don't want to find again... I believe the race is not for the swift, but for he who endures to the end... the strongest of the two... the smartest and most cunning... Great Poem... I don't see it as a freaky one... but as a reminder... Succubus Better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing. |
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