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WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-09 12:24 PM



Are you built as such
cold of touch
black of tarmac
in your soul?

This the echo
embraces urban deity
lack of nature
fresh air a dream
inner city scream.

What drum do you hear,
that of fear?
Loss of what
can be touched
in warmth of love.

Mechanics,
techno blazened freak.
With eyes weak,
from mist of acid
floating upon rain.
Futuristic of refrain.

There's more!
More of life.

Feeling the earth
seperated from the festering
putrid sore of developement.
envelopement

embellishment

upon what nature
now in agony
will naught regain.

Your world,
Circuitry designed
to hold and define
the echo.

Hold me close, and
listen to her whisper
cursed wench
won't let you go.

WhiteRose

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-10-09 03:17 PM


Yep,
our decisions
-- encroachment --
are on drugs.

And no one will say anything.
I'm glad you did, Anne.

brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
2 posted 2002-10-10 03:30 PM


Jeezus
I'll say she said it
more like
gnashed it
spit it
raged her mouth
with it

I loved this Anne
I could here you flowing
righteous
need more o' this
yes
b

[This message has been edited by brian sites (10-10-2002 03:31 PM).]

Amaranthine
Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada
3 posted 2002-10-10 07:53 PM


When I opened my eyes, the first thing I wanted to do was shut them again.  I hope you are braver.
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