Dark Poetry #3 |
-Speak Not- |
Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Speak Not I told you not to talk to me I hate it when you speak. You tell me he's not adequate. I tell you he is. Why is he talking? Why is she stalking? Why are they laughing? Why are you crying? I told you not to talk to me If he notices me maybe it's meant to be Don't tell me he's making fun of the way I'm dressed you're just jealous 'cause he don't want your caress He's coming this way, he's gonna talk to me No, don't talk to him, don't interfear I must speak, must let him know how I feel keep your mouth shut it's my turn to speak Why hello doctor, how are you today? Will you kindly undo these straps?I would like to sit up and play. What do you have for me today? Is it Risperidal?Carbamazepine? Zoloft?Prozac?Cerzone? Or is it just some therapeutic exercise to help me go to sleep? I told you not to speak You will [edit]it up We, I mean I must seem sane if I wanna go home again Why hello doctor, how are you doing today? Will you kindly undo these straps, and slap me around for a bit? What? No, what have you done? Doctor, I didn't say that, it was her... Ohhhhhhh, Yessssss Slap me around for a bit, just for a bit..... Shut up.You screwed us both Just wait till Michael, Luke, Harry, Isabel, Samantha, Oliver, Malissa, Tina, Shirley, Jason and all the others get their hands on you.They're not gonna be happy...You better hide... We're still in here thanks to you and your big tongue and we'll remain in here, strapped and trapped, chained and restrained until you learn to keep your mouth shut.I am the genious mastermind here, and just because you all occupie a piece of my mind does not mean you speak for me.Don't ever try to gain control, Understand?So be very quiet, we must deceive him. GoodBye doctor, I'll see you tomorrow, just promise me you'll slap me around and beat me senseless when I see you again???Thank You for your time and attention. I think he likes me.Did you see the way he looked at me?See, that went well, don't you think??? Well?Don't you think? Speak to me!!! Speak to me!!! Where did you go??? I'm lonely!!! Ahhhhhhhh!!! [This message has been edited by Severn (10-07-2002 06:50 AM).] |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Well, I dont know how to reply to this one. Is it a poem or a hate letter? Love the wording you put into this, kudos. |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Am agreeing with the last line: AHHHHHHHHHH!!! That was insane!! I liked it, though...has a cynical edge that doesn't appear very often in this forum! "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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Amaranthine Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 61ON Canada |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow..intense, dark, and bordering on insane. It's great. Quite a release I expect. "The first rule of poetry, write what you know." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The names of friends and names of pills are interchangeable. Wanna go the Plath, impossibly bleak and beautiful route? Drop the whole last stanza... *shiver* |
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