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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2002-09-24 04:43 PM



and all I can do,
time after time,
is keep pouting
and crying
because lonliness is still
getting to me.

and maybe
someday,
I'll be able to fly
but for right now
I'm forced to
stay grounded.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

"Speak of me as I am...one that loved not wisely but too well."
(shakespeare;othello)

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anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
London, UK
1 posted 2002-09-24 05:06 PM


Know those feelings! you said alot in a few words here, well done for not getting long winded, you got your point across well

Anya

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2 posted 2002-09-25 02:27 PM


Venus,
This is the barest sketch of loneliness;
c'mon, dig deep and show me whatcha got.

Mikey

C'mon, baby, c'mon darling,
Let me steal this moment from you now.
C'mon, angel, c'mon, c'mon, darling,
Let's exchange the experience.
-K.B.

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