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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-12-08 06:04 PM


A moment

It is gray just now,
a shadow drawn
to cover emotion’s color
while blue reigns outside
yellow hugs the sky
it is gray,
a shadow drawn
inside

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-08 10:22 PM


frozen forever. . .

well done. . .

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2 posted 2001-12-09 07:09 PM


This makes me think of a moment of pause in an otherwise happy day. Perhaps something bad trying to take hold of the wonderful feeling we have all day. As long as it did not succeed. I love this!

I am many.

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3 posted 2001-12-10 03:00 PM


like this Sunshine...James
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4 posted 2001-12-11 01:31 PM


Karilea~
A moment in passing~
The gray clears to reveal the beauty of this piece shining through~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2002-09-25 01:07 PM


Ah, how nice to see you post here, Sunshine. Even if it's an old post.
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