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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2002-09-24 12:40 PM


It should be noted
the second part     (the woman)
must be performed
with utmost doglike
submission,
while the first part
must be forced rage
without direction,
a man who's lost
his purpose.

I can't stand his voice
the man down the street
I hate his brown house
his stupid old wife
It's maddening...Hey?

Yep...

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-09-24 01:05 PM


This felt like target practice. Ouch...
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-09-24 02:45 PM


Double Ouch!
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