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Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2002-09-23 11:08 AM



My name is SuperMan,
and heres my kryptnonite.
Here's what brings me down,
and causes a loss in every fight.

The paine brings me to my knees,
and draws darkness to the light.
How long will this last?
Till she's out of sight?

Its been months since it ended.
Why can't I break free?
Its like I'm punished.
Suffering for all eternity.

I loved her then,
and I love her still.
I had the love,
for which any man would kill.

But like a good dream,
it did not last.
It was over...
over way to fast.

I'm a Super Hero,
destined to fail.
because you see...
I lost my Michelle.

© Copyright 2002 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-23 11:09 AM


This is so sad. I like the way you let your emotion flow. Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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