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Ordinary Words |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486
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Ordinary Words He swayed as if in a dream, toward me Lingering upon the precipice of acceptance with eyes glowing radiant Withholding a sweet secret he alone could whisper to love starved ears. I watched not his hands as they reached for the unseen. For I was entranced by promise and beauty, and this feeling so right. My eyes drifted closed, enthralled with such emotion, hypnotized. As with arrow shot, he pierced my heart, with look of memory best forgotten, turning away from this tale once spun. My soul drained empty of its life blood, love lay spilled upon the floor, and he has run.... Having murdered true emotion with so few ordinary words.... goodbye my love |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. Well written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
made me want to give you a hug it did arthur |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Loving a vampire. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Once more, I'm felled by your not so "Ordinary words". Have I told you, lately, how well you write? ~Ed |
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