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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2002-09-22 05:09 PM

Thoughts of you amuse,
confuse and abuse me.
Why do you constantly refuse,
then ask me to come back for more?
I swear, Love is insanity,
thinly disguised.
I rip off the veil of it,
only to find you aren’t hiding…
you aren’t really there.
So where are you?
In the sanity of me you are real.
But I am insane,
from musing thoughts of you
that profoundly confuse me;
your absence of heart
abuses me night and day.
My muse says
I should tell you
to go away.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-09-22 08:34 PM

"But I am insane,
from musing thoughts of you
that profoundly confuse me"

Kacy,
I'm sure that I've spent some time right here.
(actually, more time than I care to consider)

Glad to have the company

~Ed

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-09-22 08:41 PM

Sorry to hear that, Ed. But c'est la vie.
I prefer misery to nothingness.

arthur
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2002-09-23 05:28 AM

this is a very good poetic description of a place we all know
perhaps the answer is that we love an illusion of our own creation
arthur

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-09-23 03:06 PM

Arthur, are you reading my mind? LOL, you are so right about us loving our illusions. Especially in cyberland.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-23 05:33 PM

The idea of tearing off a thinly hidden veil
and finding no face?

*shiver*

That alone
makes this poem worth it.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-08-10 03:11 AM

Kacy . . . you do this beautifully
(own hairs standing on end here)
xxoo

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2003-08-10 10:19 AM

interesting write

shytownboy
Junior Member

since 2003-08-06

Posts 14
Chicago

8 posted 2003-08-10 12:22 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. I can relate in some ways.

Lexia
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since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

9 posted 2003-08-10 01:55 PM

Wow, very interesting. Good work.

Lex

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-08-10 03:34 PM

Awesome kacy it i insanity not so thinnly disguised though

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

11 posted 2003-08-10 05:04 PM

I honestly can say I understand where this poem came from. Sad to say but more than once.

Good write of emotions and thoughts

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

12 posted 2003-08-11 12:57 PM

Ah K...you are still one to befuddle the mind...I missed this so much!!

Take care dearest!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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