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Dark Poetry #3

say you will be there

Harmony
Junior Member

since 2002-09-12

Posts 27
GB

0 posted 2002-09-20 12:16 PM

Say you will be there

I have a little girl
who i hide deep in my heart,
a little girl who is frightened
crying alone in the dark,
Nobody can hear her
apart from myself,
all her pain and her sadness
affect my physical well being,
and my emotional health.

There was no one who would save her
during the long time ago days,
Yet many years later
she still longs to be saved.
So whenever i seem down
and if i reach for your touch,
Please try and understand me
why i need it so much,

Please don't push me away
or say you don't care,
But listen and hold me
and say you'll be there

Michelle ks,

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2002-09-20 12:49 PM

hi
this i liked
a nice write
physical health "jagged "
but i could see the scene
yes
I liked this
yours etc
arthur

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

2 posted 2002-09-20 04:36 PM

yes this was a lovley sombre piece, has a lovley quality to it, well done,

Anya

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2002-09-20 10:23 PM

awww a sweet poem of hope, I like it

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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