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0 posted 2002-09-19 08:11 AM

is this good?

Love? do you love me? but who? who..... in my heart loves me? could it be you? or you? or even you? i will never know expect for a sign? anything.... i tell you... even a simple converstation, with the person in 7th hour, sitting next too me from a 4 ft distances. She seems like a nice person..... but im just afaird.. afaird to speak... afaird of rejection... afaird of being hurt for who i'am.... WHY? WHY? somethimes i think, Where? Where? Where is thee. person who loves me?As I sit here, thinking who it is, i wonder, what it would be like to have someone who loves me? Would it Change my life, dramatically? could it? would it? should it?

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1 posted 2002-09-19 12:36 PM

This was almost uncomfortable in its honesty.
Fix the spelling of conversation,
and it's done.

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2 posted 2002-09-19 04:35 PM

Hey you caputed the feeling the way it is.


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