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Peel Me...
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Peel Me... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I am more Than just some Mere mixed up rhymes On some computer screen Or even in outdated journal enteries Peel me Like an orange Rip off the layers That surround my soul I'm a pandora's box Ready to be tasted Ready to be experienced Ready to suck you in To experience The Feelings And the pain That has been inflected upon me Sink your teeth Into the fleshy juicy memories Orange in flavour But bitter Once your senses are attacked Taste the rage Devour my words And take me as I am And take me as I was Peel me Like an orange... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
like the idea of this, some good imagery anya [This message has been edited by anya (09-18-2002 07:50 AM).] |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I liked this sound idea a person is no more than the sum of there experiances layer on layer I also found it sexually provacative but perhaps that says more about me than the poem the poem is a constant how people re-act to it work is a variable arthur |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I found a mixture of things in this, Kristen. Some of them which I'd only share in adult, if even there.  Mike |
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