Dark Poetry #3 |
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Upon Leaving |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
Upon leaving that day summer just on the way my heart already feeling the oppression of heat it skipped a beat caught breath in frame frozen yet molten hot of airless space I stayed so thus though out of place. Upon leaving a remnant remained still and forever frozen in frame while you on the cutting room floor felt nothing outside the clip. WhiteRose |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
"frozen in frame" I enjoyed this. Sometimes it's best to cut things or persons out of the picture and leave them behind. |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I loved it....it was very forwardness thingy...I hope you know what I mean..but I enjoyed. -Neala |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Damn, Anne, that's even better than my "I left you" Christmas thing. ![]() Mikey |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice work WhiteRose....wow! Enjoyed very much! DeaDiAmore |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
nice ![]() If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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