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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2002-09-15 09:49 PM



The lonesome screams of death beckon a poet. The sweet whispers paint a gossamer seascape, each wave detailed in the silver of fright. As the tones of death's music tell of the underworld's dark surrender, the moonless sky reaches for her. A poet cradles her blank canvas in her arms, letting her heart write each verse. Alone she watches, as death is unfurled before her, the gentle echoes drift freely around her. As the toes of a poet run threw the rough sand, she smiles and thanks death for another solace rendezvous.

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2002 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
D edgar Grey
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1 posted 2002-09-15 10:29 PM


I loved the image that this piece painted in my mind...it was vivid and almost melancholy. Very beautiful.
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2 posted 2002-09-16 12:27 PM


Gt,
Now that's one Romantic view of death!

Mike

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3 posted 2002-09-16 07:28 PM


Erica~

'A poet cradles her blank canvas in her arms, letting her heart write each verse.'

That is quite lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Little_White_Flowers
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4 posted 2002-09-18 06:16 PM


very nice the poem it show alot of intimate feelings...keep up the good work
1Life2Live
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5 posted 2002-09-18 09:58 PM


Loved It!
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