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Match
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0 posted 2002-09-15 02:10 AM


The rose,
Bitter sweet smelling thing,
Making you bleed,
Pricked by the sweet.

~*Azi*~

© Copyright 2002 Ashley Schell - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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1 posted 2002-09-15 05:51 AM


Very cool little thought, Match

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

anya
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2 posted 2002-09-15 09:38 AM


a very clever little poem Match, well done!, liked this alot,
Anya

Match
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3 posted 2002-09-15 01:53 PM


Thanks

~*Azi*~

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4 posted 2002-09-16 12:38 PM


Blowing the petals away, Match?

Mike

Match
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5 posted 2002-09-16 07:10 PM


Yes mike I am

~*Azi*~

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6 posted 2002-09-16 09:40 PM


Ashley~
I really like these thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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