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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-09-12 11:07 AM


I swear everytime I hear
Nickelback on the radio
You come back to haunt me
Come back to stab my spirit
Come back to tie my soul down
I swear each time
I dream of you
You come back to hurt me
Come back to steal me of my very essence
Come back to only toss me around
Like a rag doll
I swear
I'm through with you this time
And I swear to curse your name
Each time you come creeping
Back into my memory
Into my dreams
And when you  begin
To mess with the radio frequency...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
anya
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since 2002-07-27
Posts 393
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1 posted 2002-09-12 11:55 AM


'I swear everytime I hear Nickleback on the radio you come back to haunt me', I love this line, it is so true songs do have the power to bring everthing flooding back, anyway I like this very much,
anya

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-09-12 12:00 PM


I enjoyed this, Kristen -- especially the idea that he's somehow commanding the radio waves to broadcast pain to you.

Know what I do when I hear Nickelback on the radio? I turn it off and put in a Radiohead CD.

"Nothing to fear, nothing to doubt."
Mikey

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