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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-09-11 01:24 PM


I did not think
this blade
would
be so sharp
able to shave
cornea
too many times
without finding
the end

time does not dull

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-09-11 01:32 PM


brian,
This is why the TV remains off today.

You are a master of color and breath.

Mike

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-09-11 01:33 PM


I did not think
this blade
would
be so sharp
able to shave
cornea
too many times
without finding
the end

time does not dull

um, dear sweet brian, does this come with instructions. I opened it up, tried to put it together then looked and looked for some sort of instructions and found none. (am I just having another blonde moment?) Would it seem just too droll for me to ask??

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2002-09-11 01:35 PM


You know Mikey, it's highly unfair. YOU always get it. Maybe if I shake my head, more than one side of my brain will work.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-11-2002 01:35 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-09-11 01:37 PM


It probably comes with being Polish.
All those years of sauerkraut and kielbasa
are bound to do *something* to you.

Mikey

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-09-11 01:39 PM


LOL @ the polish inference. I'm swedish, and you know us swedes, we know snow, and that's about it.
Um, and the art of massage too. Forgot about that little talent.

Oh and Brian, I get it now. Thank you Mikey for the round about polish interpretation I gleaned from your response.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-11-2002 01:40 PM).]

brian sites
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6 posted 2002-09-11 01:40 PM


yes, Mike
you are wiser than I
Anne, thank you, hon
it's just....
I didn't think
today would be
this hard
it seems my armor
was merely
paint

WhiteRose
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7 posted 2002-09-11 01:43 PM


Brian, I understand. I thought the same thing. Seems this pain will not be dulled with mere passage of time. Maybe in the closeness of friends it will be assuaged.

*Warm Poetic Hugs*

WhileIWasGone
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8 posted 2002-09-11 02:02 PM


Great work Brian! Enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

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9 posted 2002-09-11 02:22 PM


At least,
in a small way,
we all have each other.

Mikey

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10 posted 2002-09-12 02:24 AM


Straight to the heart, from the heart, with so much feeling poured into so few words.
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