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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California 
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single use only darkness worried needed unwanted unwanted arching avoidance clutched hidden revealed unwanted heavy searcher avoided unavoided mind scrambled fingers scrambling torn open ripped before pause to rip pause unwanted wanted needed rip lets rip staying rip pause absorbing rip now absorbed gentler gentler gently opened better lit now opened not un-wanted just open and on and in lit and let in let it let him [This message has been edited by A. L. Becker (09-08-2002 05:19 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yikes! A tongue twisting allotment of alliteration. Had to pick through this, lest I trip and hurt something. Fun & thoughtful reading ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
um, yeah, what wranx said!  Seriously very well done! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A.L.B., Sensual darkness. Mikey |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
Thank you my friends. Annika:- "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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