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cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
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0 posted 2003-02-02 03:48 PM


And sometimes
I am alone
Without even the
Comfort of
Loneliness to hold me.
Tears do not
Flow as they should.
Sometimes my
Longing is such that
The very air I breathe
Has left me-
So alone.
I reach out to you
In need of relief
From this aloneness
That doesn’t want to
Leave,
And you offer me
Your smile;
Your hand stays at
Your side.
And my fingers touch
The space between,
Grasping at the
Nothingness.
And sometimes,
I am so alone
That even Loneliness
Turns His back on me.
Tears don’t want to
Leave my eyes, so
Tired of running
Constantly.
And I, with no
Breath to even sigh,
Close my eyes…
I close my eyes…
And go to that sweet place
That never seems meant
To materialize.
And sometimes I think
My being in this
Alone
Is where I belong;
It will not leave me,
And so I know
I am
Home.



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Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
1 posted 2003-02-02 09:11 PM


wow I really enjoyed this, Keep kickin up poems like this
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
2 posted 2003-02-02 11:34 PM


Great post.
GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
3 posted 2003-02-03 11:35 PM


And sometimes
I am alone
Without even the
Comfort of
Loneliness to hold me.

Close my eyes…
I close my eyes…
And go to that sweet place
That never seems meant
To materialize.

this is a deeply majestic piece of literature.

cinnamongirl
Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217

4 posted 2003-02-06 05:49 PM


Thank you... so much... for your beautiful words.
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