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Dark Poetry #3

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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-07 12:14 PM

I could change you

a twist here
a crease erased
a fold changed

just so

but no

betty boop
in paper
suits you

used to
complete
the feng shui

placed
but not played

surreal
not real

a distorted
characature

of a loose
cartoon slut.

WhiteRose

"I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-07-2002 12:15 PM).]

A. L. Becker
Member

since 2002-09-06

Posts 167
San Francisco, California

1 posted 2002-09-07 05:49 PM

dear WhiteRose,
nice images, i'm seeing origami, and the feng shui reference works well with that.
Annika:-

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

2 posted 2002-09-08 06:25 PM

Nice piece,

Zall

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-09 09:16 AM

Your last line cracked me up! hahahaha....I'm still laughing!

Linda

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-09-09 10:13 AM

Hi Linda, it was meant to be funny, and I laughed as I wrote it. I'm so glad you enjoyed the little bit of dark humor

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