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Dark Poetry #3

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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-08-23 06:10 AM

I am

an unread book
of yesterday’s notes
that nobody cares to refer
for I hold no mysteries
and have nothing
to reveal

unspecial
a black book with white pages
with scribbles upon
uniformly printed lines
a pebble amongst many
lying on the shore

undesired
like everybody’s misery
for my bed mate is pain
and my king is angst
and my shadow is light
holding no secrets

uninteresting
s
e
l
e
s
s

I am

perhaps?

doubting myself,
and that’s the happy sign

maybe!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2002-08-23 10:09 AM

Wow an interesting write. I that waay sometimes

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2002-09-03 07:37 AM

Thanks a lot Moon Dust...

Regards,
Sudhir

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

3 posted 2002-09-04 09:01 AM

Wowzies. I liked this. Interesting and sad, but wonderful all the same.
-Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-04 12:09 PM

SI,
If this poem was torn from that book,
I assure you,
it's not meaningless.

Mike

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

5 posted 2002-09-05 08:03 AM

Thanks a lot, Tanya and Mike...

regards,
sudhir

Zall
Member

since 2002-08-25

Posts 214
London, England

6 posted 2002-09-06 07:47 PM

Well written SL

Zall

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2002-09-09 07:43 AM

Thanks a lot, Zall...

regards
sudhir

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