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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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Our paradise of love tainted by deceit is now the abyss of the lost. I doubt the poet, I doubt the muse even cares about the cost. Lacking sensitivity minus creativity losing all your sanity now the asylum is quite full while paradise sits empty. WhiteRose "I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
ouch Anne, asylum? or "normal"? hmmmmm ouchbrian |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is a poem, alone "now the asylum is quite full while paradise sits empty." ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I always find it amazing how we can take the worst things about our lives, Anne, and make them bearable and extremely readable!  Mikey |
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