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Love's Trust Broken?
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Love's Trust Broken? |
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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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I know this isn't a very good poem... but I wrote this when I thought that I may lose the woman I love more than any other before her... I told her a secret that I kept for so long, for no other to see, but I loved her so, I did not want to hold anything back... she felt as though I had lied to her and I felt such fear, I started to writed... all my fear and agony poured out onto the computer screen... --------------------------------------------- Oh my angel, my truest love Please forgive your lowly servant For my crimes against our love I knew not the repercussions Only that I loved you more Than any other on this earth That I trust you over all others And for those reasons, I would reveal A dark secret, locked away deep inside Meant to never show to prying eyes But for my want for you to know To show I have no reason to fear That you know all that is my life I broke our sacred bond of trust I wounded your fragile heart Bringing tears to your eyes No torture or punishment could ever compare To the agony I suffer here and now To sit my dank prison without iron or stone Knowing I’ve hurt the only one Who has brought true happiness Every tear, every moment of searing pain Is the penance for my crimes against love I cannot forgive myself for what I have done For the pain I’ve caused, for my broken promise But I pray to the lord above That you may find forgiveness For your lowly servant Whose monument to you will forever stand In the whole of his heart I kneel before you now to beg “Oh my angel, please forgive me” quietly I sit, waiting for reply Oh lord, please let her forgive me Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. [This message has been edited by Lonely Shadow (09-05-2002 12:33 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Lonely Shadows, It skirts around the issue like sun-shadows of what exactly it is that needed to be forgiven, but love is usually about what you say and what you do not. I'm in trouble then -- I share *everything*!  Mikey |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Great work....enjoyed very much!!!! DeaDiAmore |
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