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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-09-04 09:18 PM

"Destruction"

You're lovable as life.
(barely.capable)
You're hateful as life.
(barely.able)

All of the pieces you've shattered, are coming together.
You're tearing me down..
You're ruining me.
All of the things you've left, are coming together in me.
You're tearing me down..
You're ruining me.

You're mysterious as night.
(barely.definable)
Yet you're precious to me.
(rarely.findable)

All of the pieces you've shattered, are coming together.
Your name is Destruction..
You're breaking me down.
All of the things you've left, are coming together in me.
Your name is Destruction..
You're breaking me down.

You're lovable as life.
(barely.conceivable)
You're hateful as life.
(barely.believable)

~After all the times I wish I were dead.. I feels so good to be alive and breathing.. quit destroying me~

Look at me...
I'm turning away, but stepping back into another hole.
So now I fall right back into it- right back into you.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-09-04 11:15 PM

Let him go, Sara (if that's what this is about).

I'm looking forward to yr poems when you do.

Mike

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-09-05 01:03 PM

I like this write. A good delving.

The squirrel dude is right. Your writing grows steadily, and I too, would like to see what you do, once you put this away.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

3 posted 2002-09-06 12:00 PM

a GOOD chant
draw the pieces
to your center
collect the SELF
until you render
the whole
and then?
rend him with your
sharpened
soul
Sarapower!

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

4 posted 2002-09-06 12:14 PM

Mike~~ Are you saying this was bad? If so, that's completely fine, and I do agree ... this isn't my best.. Possibly my worst... I'm quite perplexed at the moment. but thanks for taking the time to read.

Wranx~~ Once I put this away ... if I put this away... I think I've put this away. Yea for me.

Well,.. Anyway ... thanks a bunch.

Brian Sites~~ You make me laugh.. heh... I don't know how to describe it. You remind me of a good friend of mine...and that makes me smile. Thanks.
And now? I shall rend him with my sharpened soul!

Thanks again to the three of you!

~Sara~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-06 01:28 PM

No, Sara. You keep getting better and better in yr writing.
I'll just be glad, for you, when yr life
follows suit.

You've got some good stuff planned,
I can feel it.

And brian makes me smile, too.

Mikey

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