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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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stainmaker offspring stainmaker deed stainmaker guilt stainmaker greed stainmaker darkness stainmaker shame stainmaker live there waiting in flame stainmaker eyes stainmaker bleed stainmaker run stainmaker see stainmaker drunk stainmaker cry stainmaker hopes that reason will die I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
I like this! -Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
You proved more persistent than that cup of coffee I still wear on the clothes I can't clean without drycleaning. (And that is a strong, strong compliment) This is an exemplary piece of your work. Stained my mind, it did. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay...I've read this a kzillion times, and with your help, I understand. Sometimes a stain is like one of those ink blots--and it acts as a blueprint to a soul...You are SO deep. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks all and? as deep as a coffee mug |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*looking into my coffee mug* Hello? ello...lo....o...echoes into the deep!  |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Nice one, The unconventional style works, Zall |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
OH sibri...this is *perfect*...course I was thinkin...stainmaker? oopsie to me... grins... enjoyed this...and deep? I'm STILL diggin to get there!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"stainmaker hopes that reason will die" Likin' da hook! Hey! Tanya, is sibri short for sibrian?!? Would that be kinda like a sybaritic? Well, gonna go walk my stainmakers now. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
just one uh those pet names...you know *wranxy*??? grins... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Detanya, leave poor, gentle wranx alone! *ahem* Enjoyed yr ink spills, brian. They're staining my brain all sortsa colors. Mike |
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